[sr-dev] git:master: Minor stylistic edits to documentation.

Module: sip-router Branch: master Commit: a88d2286d84653f634721d02cb29c6d1f1067117 URL: http://git.sip-router.org/cgi-bin/gitweb.cgi/sip-router/?a=commit;h=a88d228… Author: Alex Balashov &lt;abalashov(a)evaristesys.com&gt; Committer: Alex Balashov &lt;abalashov(a)evaristesys.com&gt; Date: Thu Jan 19 07:41:12 2012 -0500 Minor stylistic edits to documentation. --- modules_k/presence_profile/README | 32 ++++++++++++-------- .../presence_profile/doc/presence_profile.xml | 5 +++ .../doc/presence_profile_admin.xml | 18 +++++----- 3 files changed, 33 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-) diff --git a/modules_k/presence_profile/README b/modules_k/presence_profile/README index ddf8e7a..c5f670e 100644 --- a/modules_k/presence_profile/README +++ b/modules_k/presence_profile/README @@ -1,16 +1,22 @@ Presence_Profile Module -Mihály Mészáros +Mihály Mészáros &lt;misi(a)niif.hu&gt; Edited by -Mészáros Mihály +Mészáros Mihály &lt;misi(a)niif.hu&gt; - Copyright � 2011 Mészáros Mihály +Edited by + +Alex Balashov + + &lt;abalashov(a)evaristesys.com&gt; + + Copyright © 2011 Mészáros Mihály __________________________________________________________________ Table of Contents @@ -41,18 +47,18 @@ Chapter 1. Admin Guide 1. Overview - The module extends presence server implementation with ability of - handling ua-profile event. When an user agent subscribes to ua-profile - event for its own AoR, it will retrieve profile data document via body - of NOTIFY request. + The module extends the presence server implementation, providing the + ability to handle the 'ua-profile' event. When a user agent subscribes + to ua-profile event for its own AoR, it retrieves the profile data + document from the body of a NOTIFY request. - The profile data document format is usually specific per user agent, - such documents have to be built and added to presentity table by the - admin or a third party application. + The profile data document format is usually specific to the user agent. + Such documents have to be built and added to presentity table by either + the admin or a third party application. - Warning: When you add profile data document (i.e., user agent's - provisioning config) to presentity table, then you must make sure that - you set the presentity table expires field to a time value in long + Warning: When you add a profile data document (i.e. the user agent's + provisioning config) to the presentity table, you must make sure that + you set the presentity table expires field to a time value far in the future. Read more about SIP user agent configuration framework in RFC6080: diff --git a/modules_k/presence_profile/doc/presence_profile.xml b/modules_k/presence_profile/doc/presence_profile.xml index 9478a57..4968ba7 100644 --- a/modules_k/presence_profile/doc/presence_profile.xml +++ b/modules_k/presence_profile/doc/presence_profile.xml @@ -23,6 +23,11 @@ <surname>Mihály</surname> &lt;email&gt;misi(a)niif.hu&lt;/email&gt; </editor> + <editor> + <firstname>Alex</firstname> + <surname>Balashov</surname> + &lt;email&gt;abalashov(a)evaristesys.com&lt;/email&gt; + </editor> </authorgroup> <copyright> <year>2011</year> diff --git a/modules_k/presence_profile/doc/presence_profile_admin.xml b/modules_k/presence_profile/doc/presence_profile_admin.xml index 355159f..81e1b94 100644 --- a/modules_k/presence_profile/doc/presence_profile_admin.xml +++ b/modules_k/presence_profile/doc/presence_profile_admin.xml @@ -17,20 +17,20 @@ <section> <title>Overview</title> <para> - The module extends presence server implementation with ability of - handling ua-profile event. When an user agent subscribes to ua-profile - event for its own AoR, it will retrieve profile data document - via body of NOTIFY request. + The module extends the presence server implementation, providing the ability + to handle the 'ua-profile' event. When a user agent subscribes to ua-profile + event for its own AoR, it retrieves the profile data document from the body + of a NOTIFY request. </para> <para> - The profile data document format is usually specific per user agent, such - documents have to be built and added to presentity table by the admin + The profile data document format is usually specific to the user agent. Such + documents have to be built and added to presentity table by either the admin or a third party application. </para> <para> - Warning: When you add profile data document (i.e., user agent's - provisioning config) to presentity table, then you must make sure that you - set the presentity table expires field to a time value in long future. + Warning: When you add a profile data document (i.e. the user agent's + provisioning config) to the presentity table, you must make sure that you + set the presentity table expires field to a time value far in the future. </para> <para> Read more about SIP user agent configuration framework in RFC6080: